Seiren – 10

「桃乃今日子 第2章 オサガリ」 (Touno Kyouko dai 2-shou - Osagari)
"Touno Kyouko Chapter 2 – Hand-Me-Down"

"Restrung everyone's rackets" is a weird way to talk about an orgy.

Seiren – 09

「桃乃今日子 第1章 カテイブ」 (Touno Kyouko dai 1-shou - Kateibu)
"Touno Kyouko Chapter 1 - Home Ec Club"

There is no pivot. There will never be a pivot. This is what Seiren is.

Seiren – 08

「宮前透 最終章 モフモフ」 (Miyamae Tooru sai Shuushou - Mofumofu)
"Miyamae Tooru Final Chapter - Fluffy"

This was better, but it was still a second draft, tops. Refinement was needed, which it never got.

Seiren – 07

「宮前透 第3章 ブラコン」 (Miyamae Tooru dai 3-shou - Burakon)
"Miyamae Tooru Chapter 3 - Brother Complex"

Finally, the romantic tension is---no, wait, never mind. Still waiting.

Seiren – 03

「常木耀 第3章 オトコユ」 (Tsuneki You dai 3-shou Otokoyu)
"Tsuneki Hikari Chapter 3 - In the Men's Bath"

Finally, it's time for the conflict---though what that conflict is isn't clear yet.